Monday, March 1, 2010


Im really looking for Critique on this one, to push it further. I would appreciate the help.


Hannah said...

I think that it would be awesome if you had even more detail in the guns and in the car itself. I've never played the game, so I don't know what it's supposed to look like. It looks way sweet right now, but I think you can push it a bit further in the lights and shadows and add detail. Right now I think the darks are a bit spotty, they're kind of spread all over the car, maybe group them a bit with a darkish value. I think that would help it separate from the background. Anyway, I hope that helped a bit.

Cassie said...

I agree with Hannah, the values could use some work, but I think you could push the concept too. I seems like an older car with junk-yard like improvements. The car itself looks brand new off the lot. I think you could bust it up a little. Like a broken head light replaced with bungee corded flashlight or different rims... stuff like that would add more character to the car. I like the 3/4 view and gun on top! Keep going!