tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693409957854946709.post2803857804046615273..comments2024-01-16T02:49:33.068-08:00Comments on Trevor J Brown: Super HeroUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693409957854946709.post-43496983612169395442007-01-29T10:12:00.000-08:002007-01-29T10:12:00.000-08:00Trevor-
Congrats on your work. It looks like you ...Trevor-<br /><br />Congrats on your work. It looks like you put in more time than most on this assignment. I hope I'm right. <br /><br />However, I do wonder if the sandwich could have been "beefed" up more. I can see four ingredients. I would think that a sandwich that kick's hunger's butt would have much more on it. Meatballs, multiple layers of tomatoes, pickles, onions, sauce coming out the sides etc. <br /><br />Nice work. I look forward to see what you post next week.Brandonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09946236505355030572noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693409957854946709.post-24174708520686699272007-01-25T07:17:00.000-08:002007-01-25T07:17:00.000-08:00I like this one, it is one of my favorites. Not o...I like this one, it is one of my favorites. Not only is the idea funny, but it looks like you had an easier time with Illustrator than most of your classmates. I think you could have added more, maybe a bag of chips or a pickle or something beside it. And I'm not sure I like the drop shadows on the stripes. Good job.Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10238748483635330823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693409957854946709.post-16262313437840616612007-01-22T14:29:00.000-08:002007-01-22T14:29:00.000-08:00Really nice illustration. I like your line quality...Really nice illustration. I like your line quality a lot. Yeah it looks computer-y but not in the bad sense. Your line thickness variation is very well done. I have a problem with the type. I think it should be bigger, or smaller and could be placed better. Also, the only reason that the black outline on the type looks ok is because of the black outline on the sandwich. I almost think the type shouldn't have the outline. You should see if it looks better.Mike Laugheadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07756846749275310356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693409957854946709.post-22778449225353118412007-01-22T13:00:00.000-08:002007-01-22T13:00:00.000-08:00I love it! You are so dang creative, you genius y...I love it! You are so dang creative, you genius you! Seriously, I really like it, send it to subway.Casey Stadlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07752122121349957194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693409957854946709.post-23376500655369836182007-01-20T01:30:00.000-08:002007-01-20T01:30:00.000-08:00Sweet Illo! It looks like a good super...I mean su...Sweet Illo! It looks like a good super...I mean supper. Nice thinkin outside the box! I am hungry now.Kelli Jensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01918081602968939485noreply@blogger.com